All Comments on 'The Sleepover'

Oh yes, so we've got a guy who:

- is just a pussy and ofc MUST BE CONSTANTLY AFRAID OF BANGING HIS SISTER

- always must ask other girls if he should use a condom / if theyre on the pill.

Congratulations mate, you've written a copybook story that makes my cock go limp. Definitely 1 star, and I just pray other guys won't have to read this ****

A sexual smorgasbord !

Well words fail me , just one long sexy read wow and wow again , Love the sex , love the orgy , love Brandon fucked his sister ,

I love my brother too ❤️ yes we did and yes we still do . In fact we read this together . Yes we did ❤️

Your detail is very sexy , you write very well , Thankyou for a sexy night ❤️

I am dissipation of those two, finally getting it on me hard throughout the whole story. good, fun story, and every guys fantasy.

This story got me fantasizing about my sister I haven't fucked her in a while I'm horny right now I'm texting my sister now pretending to be someone else she asked me what I was doing I told her I was watching incest porn I'll let you know what happens

I think this is the kind of stuff dreams are made of, at least when you're young. Kuddos for such a fantastic filthy and creative mind, it's a sexy as hell story, very well written, and I appreciate the funny parts too. One could almost feel being there in the most sexy contest, touching, feeling, smelling, that was fantastic. Lucky any guy who has a hot sister and gets to fuck her, not to mention her friends also. 5 stars my man.

wHAT A STORY, i REALLY GOT INTO IT AND COULD HAVE READ FOR HOUR,S ON END , mate, you have a gift for writing, it was by far one of the best tales I have ever read, a good author needs to get his readers into the story and hold them for as long as he can and you did that in spades. at times I felt I was there looking on, can I suggest more ,more MORE,, very good , believe me.....

I'd love to play with alex. She sounds like a scrumptious piece of chocolate

5 by 5! And oooh YES! There's a chapter 2! This just got better!

Was going to say it could be better, there could be more.... and it turns out there is. Can't wait to read the rest.

Outstanding! Couldn't put it down! I was drawn in immediately and you never lost my attention throughout. Lots of highs and lows to keep ya guessing. A totally erotic and sexually charged endingMORE MORE MORE!😎

I loved all of it it was very exotic

It's good but I could do without Kristina. Leave Lauren & Brandon alone. They need their own alone time

5 stars !

This was an incredibly HOT story that I don't think anyone can read and not enjoy...

...I certainly did !

That was one hell of a story! 5 stars all the way 🔥

"KREMKOVA"-four months ago...you really should keep your opinions to yourself...because you have NO TASTE, OR DISCERNMENT...

This is a magnificent storyline and I am so looking forward to the 2nd chapter!! Yyyaaayyy!!!!!

Five**5**Stars!!

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