All Comments on 'The Sleepover'

I love your captivating writing and appreciate your sharing your self!

Actually over the top creative, but very entertaing. After the 3rd page, I was still reading.

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If this was still my first time reading this rather then my fifth all i would say is Kristina and Lauren and Brandon, marriage, threesomes, three way couple and more. my title says just how much im liking this series.

I seldom read stories this long but it was so good I enjoyed every para, right to the end.

I love this story and hope to fuck my sister's like this

Was an amazing read, wish there was more that happened between Lauren and Brandon but overall loved it

Absolutely one of the most erotic and well-written stories I have read.

Just loved it! Oh what an unbelievable dream eh!

Thank you

makes no sense. after Kristina looses her virginity, Lauren says "your a woman now."

There are recorded instances of CHILDREN as young as 7 to 9 giving birth, in the Middle East. Is anyone going to call the CHILDREN women?

It requires a great deal more than loosing her virginity for a girl to become a woman. The age of 18 des not qualify as being a woman, a girl must be at least 21 to become a woman, regardless of what else she has done.

I loved the story and wish it was all in one story instead of a 8 page. It would have been a book instead of a break in each page.

Wish authors would learn the difference between site and sight.

Wish you guys would just shut the fuck up over free stories errors. They happen.

This is a great story. Miss the followup. Please continue with it.

I really enjoyed this. 💯🔥❤️

“We shall see how you feel in the morning”

I know that one of the girl is a squitter but when brandon was fucking her there was no mention of that .

I really enjoyed reading this and I wish I had a sis like that

Each detail and naughty act had me on edge... loved how long it was and wish there was more!!! Please continue...

I keep coming back to read this story. On to chapt 2

Would you fuck my wife? And do her in front of me?

Great story, every man could wish for an opportunity like this story, bot it was wasaaayy tooooo loooong!!! I lost my hardness at least twice per each page.

I read this story years ago thinking what a bloody brilliant story this was and I was 100% sure that you would continue on with a sequel. How wrong was I. I and many others are disappointed that you didn’t. Is is one of the best stories I’ve read but for me it incomplete. I remember I didn’t vote last time because I was going to wait until it was finished. Anyway ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Finally, I found it. I’ve been reunited with the first thing I’ve ever came to.

Having had the pleasure of a threesome & a sister act the thoughts Brandon is having sound familiar. Really good, kept my attention & me AT attention all the way through. A sequel is certainly called for. Just enough to get through the afternoon at least

I read this "over 3 years ago"; read all of the comments, sheesh. I suspected as much, but old minds forget things. I loved it as much this time.

The few flaws in the writing were minimal.

Loved that they waited until they were alone before the bro/sis intercourse; made it more real for them. Subconscious love that was not realized until now.

I don't understand people who think that it was too long. Some mentioned it should have been written in 2 or 3 chapters. WTF? You are still reading 8 pages.

Really enjoyed the second reading. I'm glad you decided to write 2 more chapters. Thanks for you're efforts.

Very good story.

Very sexy story even the second time around and very well written also!

A really nice written erotica.

Sadly the same can't be said about the rest of the series, so if you just want to have a good time let your imagination do the job, or go on and be ready for disappointment.

I wish I could remember what it was like to fuck that many times in a day.

A tour de force of sensual imagery! Nothing rushed, the heat builds and builds, and after the climax(es), the exquisite pleasure continues. I hope there's more (going to look RIGHT NOW!)

This story is so hot and Well written.. no wonder why so many people favorited this story it’s amazing.. keep writing like that and u will be earning money soon..

I don't know what some people are saying, this is amazing! I came maybe three or four times, I lost count...can someone inspect my pussy like that?

The computer clicked too soon! The story is fantasy, but captivating. Kept me up way past bedtime!

Very well written! And very HOT too. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Fucking HOT!

There should be a place for 6 stars, for Great stories like this one.

Great story. Well written and a total turn on. Really gets one heated up.

Tell anonymous who left the comment on 07/21, if she gives directions the inspector is on the way! Lol

Usually in a story of this length there is a page or two that I skip, as it is just filler. Not this story! I READ EVERY WORD! Many of them twice as I wanted to get the exact picture with all the details in my mind. If you are lucky enough to read this story with a partner, you will definitely take a LOT of breaks. Hee hee. It is rare you find a story of that caliber on any site.

So much more than just a story about incest between brother and sister. Well written and a real page turner - couldn't wait to get to the end so I could start over.

Great story lots of perfect details makes being single and only child suck loved it

This is the best lots of love. JOHN. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx605

great story right up until you brought dad into it you people need to learn that kinda forcing things in stories is a no no it has to be a natural occurance her mother forcing it by saying she need to sleep with her father just totaly took all the nice romantic part out of it which was the whole hook in this story

What a great story. I felt like I knew the participants. It was imaginative, checking off almost all my fantasies while being sensitive, absorbing and stimulating. Looking forward to more!

I read this story maybe 4 years ago and loved it then as I do now. Just written with a natural flow to it. Enjoyable sexy fun loving and at times erotic!

Well Done Maestro! Bravo Bravo

It is good when you read it ,we'll see how we feel in the morning

A clever tale with plenty of female involvement.

Keep up the good work.

Cheers,

I really enjoyed this. It was fun, sexy, respectful and not abusive. I really loved your sense of humor and burst out laughing when I read: “Why don't I just tell her you're eating our pussies and can't come to the phone right now?”. I found myself chuckling quite a bit. Very well written.

I just loved this story

Not only was it a fantastic story, but it left me wanting more without feeling unsatisfied... well done!

Can I have your old one? Best comment of the story. Great story, loved it. Leaked through the whole thing.

Very well written. Loved it!!!

WELL YOU DID IT MY FRIEND.

The ONLY 5 star rating I've given in 3 years of reading stories on this (actually ANY ) sex story

web site........ all in can really say is...... BRAVO !

Excellent story what a great read. Lasting erotic writing extending my enjoyment of the story. Great job

Well done great story engaging and leave wanting more !

great story. fixing to read ch 2

Wish I has a sister!

This story is what many young guys dream about. The author understood that his sister would not initially want to have sex with her brother, however observing all the sexual antics happening in front of her, she would find her vaginal juices start to flow & her breathing rate increase as she became turned on.

Ultimately it would be difficult for her to ignore her brother, & she would be unable to resist having his dick penetrate her vagina.

Now the future is full of opportunities as they have already enjoyed incest, and repeating their lovemaking would be obvious to them both.

I wonder if SamSlam has actually engaged in sister incest, or whether it is just something he has imagined.

OMG! One of the absolute BEST stories that I have ever read ! Thank you for posting !

Five PLUS Stars! One of the best. Read the first part at Lush Stories and then found out the entire story was here! More please!

5+ stars. Fantastic story. Can't wait to read Chapter 2. One of the best I've read, and I've read many. Read the story over the course of a few days and I became obsessed with finishing to see where this led. Glad I did.

great story, love how every girls is different and the continues struggle to or not to give in to the passion. the fact the friends wanted to help kristina feels better about herself.

The mark of a great story when everyone is wondering if the author actually had a sister who was having a lingerie sleepover. One of the best sex stories I’ve read in Literotica.

I FUCKING LOVE IT!!!!! Great story!!!!!

The delicious unceasing teasing, flirting was so damn painful. Your story was Outstanding, Brilliant, so well done. But I'm a bit confused; I remember reading this story weeks ago and I was upset because it ended on a cliffhanger at the point where Brandon was or was about to start munching on the ladies and not getting to munch Lauren. It was begging for another chapter. Were there two versions in your story list? Did you resubmit the story? Was there a glitch on the website? Did I imagine it? Well, I gave this story 5 stars and I wish I could have given it more. Thank you for submitting this wonderful, painfully tender story. The ending was totally unexpected and exciting.

I thought part one of your Home Movies story couldn't be topped. Yet, herein, you have! Excellent story!

Great story

Well written and exceedingly arousing. Superb!

Love it...

that was sexy but at some points it was so misogynistic

Got fucked up with the reasoning to fuck Kristina....should have just been brother and sister fucking snd he should have refused the other 3....friend Kylie is such a bitch.....nit worth having friends like this

Only takes two words to review this:

THE BEST!!

Well done! Although... I would have loved if it was just the dude and his sister,I also love the banter between Brandon and Lauren between the sex, wish it ended with them making it clear to each other that they are in love with each other and them understanding completely but,that is probably why there is a (sequel?) Hopefully the confession actually happens in the (sequel?) with a happy ending

Wow, so many emotions. I loved this

Amazing

Very hot. Great build up. 5

I love this story, can you continue and make it work out.

Best story I've read lately!!!

This story is Fantastic!!!! One of the best on my list!!!!!!!!!

Absolutely amazing! You should try adding some backstory, but apart from the that the ratio of storytelling to arousal is near perfect. If this was a book available to buy, it would definitely sell! Keep up the good work!

Yours truly,

P

great story, one of the few about a guy getting multiple girls that was realistic enough to actually happen! love it!

Just love the fuckin story👏👏👏👏 10/10

WOW

Wonderful

Fantastic

Very romantic and hot 😻🔥

Probably The best Story i have read till this moment ❤️

Absolutely sucking fucking fabulous, love the cunnilingus, I absolutely adore cunt in every way, Cuntlapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

I’m sorry but this was all a self centered story about how great you think you are at pleasing women.

Every once in a blue moon, I read this story. It's like going back in time and putting on an old comfortable sweater. I wish we could give 10 stars!

This what erotica is meant to be!

Sam I truly hope you return to read comments as this

has been one of the few complete stories I've read-including my own!!!!

Jack

REALLY INTRIGUING...WELL DONE!!

Second read, even better.

Wow wow absolutely fantastic that has to be one of the hottest and sexist stories I have ever read, xx

Wow fantastic slant that women and men learn more about each other.

Great story, only part that bothered me is the part where you had to push past her barrier! Her being Kristina. Most virgins no longer have a hymen

Totally mind-blowing if it is true they are all just so lucky they all get on with it just pure fun

5-star crazy hot fun. Just right.

Totally sexy fun and hot. Mixed a little jealousy in there from sister which to me makes it hotter.

5/5

Entertaining and intriguing,top marks for style and pace.

Fantastic 5 star indeed. Great story with just the right mix of characters, erotic intensity, and once and for all, the ultimate prize, his sister. But I do love the overtone of where it leads to next, and it would be awesome to read about the "threesome" with engagement between all three. I hope there's a sequel to this. Thank you.

Ought to make this story into a movie.

This is one of my favorite series on the entire site. I wish the author would continue it, but it seems quite old, the last entry being 4 years ago.

I loved this story

Your writing skills are awesome