All Comments on 'The Sleepover'

Excellent

Whew! I generally much prefer slow burn stories and have my favorite authors, but when there’s nothing new from them I’ll check out new stories. Usually I’ve found new authors tend to write short stroke stories, and often not very good ones. This was hot! You managed to instill some plot, and gave enough description of the very likable characters (thx for not using 34DD or whatever…I hate that) for me to get into the story. And the actual sex was warm, believable and intense in a very good way! Hope you keep writing!

Great first story! Keep them coming....

Very nicely written, now they need to ditch the boyfriends and slowly realise how much they mean to each other while the romance grows. Much more please.

Perfection

YOU ARE HOT!!!

So hot loved it. Keep up the good work

Really hot! I could picture, and smell, the girls having sex!!

Really hot sex between two girls. Hope they continue to make love with each other

This story turned me on so much