All Comments on 'The Slow Dance Ch. 02'

by minnie_fae

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Oh I just LOVE IT!

You write very well. I am eagerly awaiting Chapter 3. I think the princess is such a darling ingenue. And Luke is just altogether YUM!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
So obsessed

I hope the 3rd chapter comes just as quickly! Great story !!

minnie_faeminnie_faeabout 10 years agoAuthor
:)

Thank you :) it's already been submitted so it should just be a day or two! x

MaynessMaynessabout 10 years ago

Another good chapter and so quickly posted too, thank you. The scene is erotic whilst laying some foundation to Luke's character and desires. Ivy's innocence is endearing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

small_town_girlsmall_town_girlabout 10 years ago
awesome story!

read both chapters in one go - absolutely loved it!

love the premis of this story, beautiful character developemnt and super hot sex - AND really well written, too. eagerly waiting your next chapter :)

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