All Comments on 'The Slut'

This story has great potential. Further developement of the Mellisa character could have increased the impact greatly.

A lush story...but naturally I want more...like a follow up on our little pain slut in the control of her new master and her experiences as his whore.

Well, just found this lovely story. What struck me first hand was how well this guy took care of Melissa after he, and Belle, made her do things that Melissa did not know was within her own body and mind. So many stories in the BDSM genre often have the sub being beaten and then left with no aftercare at all. Even a slave like Melissa needs to be loved and taken care of.