All Comments on 'The Smiths' New Neighbors'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
GGrrrrreeeeeeaaaaaaat!

Hopefully this will be continued? There are so many possibilities for additional storylines. keep up the awesome work.

JS in NE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Get Going

The possibilities are staggering. So what are you waiting for 'cause I'm waiting for chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great Story

Read most of your stories, and they are all great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
magic story

this story is so hot, really needs to be finished,cant wait to read the next chapter,so please keep them coming.many thaks for the great read.

indigodragonindigodragonalmost 19 years ago
happy muthas day

damn good stuff on mothers day. gonna break out the taboo sreies and bone my wife crazy. please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
great

lets have a part 2 here where they trade moms are have a four way fuck.

don,t make us wait so long. please .

Leon22Leon22almost 19 years ago
Great work Zaxxon

You portrayed Emily perfectly and Betty was amazing as always. You've outdone yourself again Zaxxon. All of us are eager to see what you've got coming next!

VikingboyVikingboyalmost 19 years ago
baby batter?

This is not as good as everyone else seems to think. Too obvious, too cliched, too "plot" driven (if you call this "wham, Bam, Thank You, Ma'am" stuff a plot.

The thing that really got to me, though, beyond the "can I help you... oh fuck me" plotting was the euphemisms for semen. Sorry, folks, but "baby batter"? That's one batter that strikes out

Please......

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot and Sleazy

Two pervert mothers and two hot sons having sex together, incest can't get much better than this. I was as horny as fuck while I read it. Great stuff, let's have lots more stories of Betty and Bobby and Emily and Mark.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
THE SMITHS NEW NEIGHBORS

HOPE THE MOMS GETTOTHER WHILE THE SONS WATCH BIG STORY THERE,THANKS FOR BIG BREASTED WOMEN..

goducks1goducks1about 5 years ago
wow

very sexy story!!! can't wait to read chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Tits are 38DD, and perky???

By age 40, her nipples would be looking at her knees.

Tyr thinking about what you write, and make it believable.

Anonymous
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