All Comments on 'The Snow Man Ch. 04'

I'm rapidly getting the impression this snowbound story will have about 30 chapters to it...

each story builds up hotter and hotter as alex becomes more open.

i'm really enjoying alex discovering his sexuality, and honestly, am somewhat envious of this fictional character!

great work, keep us cumming!

This is excellent work. A simple story line, plausible, and efficiently paced. So far the theme of discovery isn't overplayed and "love" hasn't entered the picture. So far it's a nice, true-feeling rendering of a chance encounter. Don't let it go on too long. And resist delivering any messages you might have been thinking of. Let them go their separate ways and leave it at that. The best literotica is quick, hones, dosen't preach, and leaves you wondering. This piece is well on the way to being an example of the very best.

-r