All Comments on 'The Society Ch. 04'

I have to say, your a talented author. I can't wait for another addition to this series. There's a couple of typos and misspelled words, but those mistakes don't make the storyline hard to follow, I still know what your talking about. I don't know if you submit stories on a routine of sorts or if the stories are complete or not, but an idea for you, could be to introduce Jill as a dominatrix, that gets ownership over Carey(Denny).

Other than that keep up the good overall story development!

I am enjoying this series so please don't leave it unfinished whatever you do.

Your writing is awesome

Very good, but please finish it.

This is an incredibly hot story, probably, no definitely the best I've read.

Please give us Chapter 5.

I beg you!