by Dam_Fool
What would you prefer, a verbatim description of a porno. It's in the right category, rubbish is your opinion. Which is only and all it is, YOUR opinion. Which ain't shit.
people wouldn't feel as though this chapter were in the wrong category. Looking at the tags for your story, I understand it better now because I was lost the entire time. My only other complaint is to make your chapters a little longer. I'll keep reading to see where your story goes. Good luck!
Well thank you very much.
Sadly, I never planned for the rest of the chapter to take so long in getting posted. This is my first time posting here, so next time, I will try to combine many chapters into one post. This is a prologue and set-up.