All Comments on 'The Solicitor & The Baroness Ch. 00'

by Dam_Fool

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Rubbish in the wrong category.

Dam_FoolDam_Foolabout 7 years agoAuthor

What would you prefer, a verbatim description of a porno. It's in the right category, rubbish is your opinion. Which is only and all it is, YOUR opinion. Which ain't shit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I think if you'd added more details...

people wouldn't feel as though this chapter were in the wrong category. Looking at the tags for your story, I understand it better now because I was lost the entire time. My only other complaint is to make your chapters a little longer. I'll keep reading to see where your story goes. Good luck!

Dam_FoolDam_Foolabout 7 years agoAuthor

Well thank you very much.

Sadly, I never planned for the rest of the chapter to take so long in getting posted. This is my first time posting here, so next time, I will try to combine many chapters into one post. This is a prologue and set-up.

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