All Comments on 'The Solitary Arrow Ch. 13'

A fitting follow-up to the previous chapter. You have a talent for telling a story carefully woven together with many different threads. !!!!!

I got confused when you wrote that they ate the last of their food one night, and then later that their provisions would last for five days if they were careful. A little thing, but it took me "out" of what was otherwise a really good installment. Thanks for this overall excellent story!

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