All Comments on 'The Soprano Ch. 08'

I have loved reading this series and am glad to see they are in love with each other!

Off to "Pay" homage at retail - I will gladly pay any price you and #Titiania123 ask for your art.

I look ever day for this story it was great sorry it ended but you did good love how it did I will be looking for another one till then wish you will

I love this story.. The passion, the music, the emotions.. Everything are perfect.. It is a truly pleasurable read.. Thankyou for sharing it with us..

An epilogue would totally complete this story

This is by far one of the most amazing stories I have read. I would love to read more about Claire and Sebastian!!! If this was to be published, I would buy it in a heartbeat!

You asked about revisions. My previous comment contained a request for more editing of auto complete induced errors. They are minor, but interrupt the flow that you so beautifully create. I would love to see more character development, and an even more relaxed pace. There is plenty of sex in your stories. I think you could take more time in exploring her experience, her feelings at the moment, her conflict over being submissive, perhaps a conversation with a friend, or an article in the Chronicle which might spark thought on what she was allowing to be done to her. For some the backstory of submission is more evident, but in Claire's case, not so much, and she is very much a bottom. So, what I am thinking of is enhancing the profundity of the characters rather than adding more volume of sexual experiences. Speaking of which, I would love to see some post coital lingering. What man would not want to linger with such a woman after the marathon of orgasms experienced. Furthermore, I love to read of the leaking, dribbling, gravity driven rivulets of cum oozing out of her, and whatever feelings they might have about that.

You are a very talented writer. Thank you very much for your gifts to us.

all that and a happy ending, too! beautifully composed, wonderfully comprehensive, and seriously intriguing. If you could see your way to more, that would be our "in the morning" delight.