All Comments on 'The Sorceress and The Maiden'

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MaonaighMaonaighover 2 years ago
Let's have more

A well-written short erotic fantasy with some nice descriptive passages to open. My sole criticism is that it finished a little abruptly. However, the whole was sufficient for me to say let's have more from you.

Candy_Kane54Candy_Kane54over 2 years ago

Nice! I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes ...

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