All Comments on 'The Sound of Muesli'

Muesli in the US is a cereal used as a stool softener, and the Sound of Muesli... Not pleasant. It probably put a some readers off, scat and sex being extreme kink. I thought the lack of emotion and drama made it a pedestrian story ( pun intended). The dialog was good, but you didn't tell or show us how they felt, stones shifting straining ankles, the first rivelet of cold water down your back etc.

Chilley

So, what's wrong with nice? Two real people, no 44DD tits, no 10-inch schlongs, no little death orgasms and at least 6 or 8 of those, of course. Just two adults of character and substance, who may or may not end up being life long partners, but illustrating a more normal and healthy way for such relationships to start, and progress. Yeah, something normal people could relate to; even emulate.

Thanks for the break from the miserable people more often portrayed on this site!

Enjoyable little tale!