All Comments on 'The Spark Ch. 01'

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crankenheimercrankenheimer7 months ago

Any chance of another chapter.?

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 4 years ago

You started a very nice story. but it ended to soon. You would think with the Pandemic and the world going to S__t that you might have come back and wrote some more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Boring premise which has been done about 5 million times before.

9730baldsanta9730baldsantaalmost 5 years ago
great start

I enjoyed the premise but it was way to short. keep it coming, looking forward to next installment.

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 5 years ago
A great start!

It's a great start to this story! A bit brief, but I'm hoping to read more of it! Thank you!

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