All Comments on 'The Spell: The Blizzard'

I like these stories, but the settings are rather insular, a small group of people suddenly getting infected with little interaction with society in general. I'd like to see more about how society is affected. People turning up to work naked, people who have an aversion to seeing naked people, that sort of thing. Your original stories set around a school which you withdrew were more interesting.

I liked the story, but it seems something's missing at the paragraph after "No kidding," Sarah agreed as Ben walked over to the radio and flicked it on, "I'm soaked through to my underwear,". The phrase has no meaning, and the HTML code is broken, worng.

Why do most paragraphs end with a comma???