by CloverGazer
Very interesting. Great as a one off, but it would be nice to know what backstory youโve cooked up.
Also very hot.
5*
Tc
Yes, please continue this story. I am very curious how the rest of the story will evolve.
I think it could end here or keep going. I wouldn't mind more of the story.
Oh I hope it's not the end. I know you've got several other stories. Which i also like. And I know you said this might be a one off. But you also said it might not if you get enough support. Well count me in as supporting. I'm sure it will be difficult, what with your other tales, but honestly I'm digging them all. 5/5 stars and hope you do consider adding to it.
Dewey Cheatham
Most, of, your, sentences, include, the, very, first one, on, page, one, have, entirely too many, commas. See what I did there?
Great story. Can*t wait to see if medallion works on Paige. Will be waiting for your next chapter.
Maybe we see them bring her friend into the house and get a 3way relationship going?
Oh my gosh please continue.. I want to read more give me give me don't give up continue please.. awesome awesome story.. not to mention your writing was very good I've read some really bad ones on here and this one is really good.. thank you
I don't mind continuing and you can add mom milf as Kendra Last! brother fucks his sister and milf mother
Very enjoyable and nicely written but I'd have preferred a slower build up. It was a little rushed and therefore somewhat predictable. BTW, the comment regarding commas was ridiculous and obviously written by someone who skipped the classes on punctuation.
I am very intrigued at the story. I love your writing and this is another avenue for you to explore. Please keep this series going!
Good stuff. Definitely would like for the story to grow and see where you take it.
Loved it! Seemed a little rushed but since it was a break I understand why. Iโd be curious to read more of this story