All Comments on 'The Spellbound Medallion'

by CloverGazer

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very interesting. Great as a one off, but it would be nice to know what backstory youโ€™ve cooked up.

Also very hot.

5*

Tc

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticabout 1 year ago

"The end?" I think it should be the beginning.

mnemnethmnemnethabout 1 year ago

No!!!! More much more please ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

Holistic_VoyeurHolistic_Voyeurabout 1 year ago

Yes, please continue this story. I am very curious how the rest of the story will evolve.

Sex_CrazedSex_Crazedabout 1 year ago

I think it could end here or keep going. I wouldn't mind more of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Oh I hope it's not the end. I know you've got several other stories. Which i also like. And I know you said this might be a one off. But you also said it might not if you get enough support. Well count me in as supporting. I'm sure it will be difficult, what with your other tales, but honestly I'm digging them all. 5/5 stars and hope you do consider adding to it.

Dewey Cheatham

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Most, of, your, sentences, include, the, very, first one, on, page, one, have, entirely too many, commas. See what I did there?

Cutty4637Cutty4637about 1 year ago

I would definitely like to see more.

lantern04lantern04about 1 year ago

I would like to see more of this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story. Can*t wait to see if medallion works on Paige. Will be waiting for your next chapter.

redlion75redlion75about 1 year ago

Maybe we see them bring her friend into the house and get a 3way relationship going?

PinkLily7575PinkLily7575about 1 year ago

Oh my gosh please continue.. I want to read more give me give me don't give up continue please.. awesome awesome story.. not to mention your writing was very good I've read some really bad ones on here and this one is really good.. thank you

Slave19941994Slave19941994about 1 year ago

I don't mind continuing and you can add mom milf as Kendra Last! brother fucks his sister and milf mother

KachinaDollKachinaDollabout 1 year ago

Very enjoyable and nicely written but I'd have preferred a slower build up. It was a little rushed and therefore somewhat predictable. BTW, the comment regarding commas was ridiculous and obviously written by someone who skipped the classes on punctuation.

PandelusionPandelusionabout 1 year ago

I am very intrigued at the story. I love your writing and this is another avenue for you to explore. Please keep this series going!

JxxxTolkienJxxxTolkienabout 1 year ago

Definitely would like to see more of this story!

WatcherEyeWatcherEyeabout 1 year ago

Good stuff. Definitely would like for the story to grow and see where you take it.

BottomdanBottomdanabout 1 year ago

Loved it! Seemed a little rushed but since it was a break I understand why. Iโ€™d be curious to read more of this story

mharrisonmharrisonabout 1 year ago

Good start - would love to read more.....

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*Sorry, no update yet* Im currently on hiatus. Manor of workload in my real life is the cause. However, I always have my stories on the brain and keep notes on ideas and where I want them to go. I'll try and get some done before too long... Upcoming submissions: (In no parti...