by Quiet_Cool
That was a good one Q_C.
So much going on in that story, I don't know where to begin.
Well done!
Got into it. I am glad he realized that his wife was with him in his children.
Holy shit, what a terrific story. You had me glued to my chair until the end. Phew.
Sorry but I didn't enjoy that one at all. This guy who has shamelessly neglected his children for 2 years out of longing for his dead wife gets one goodbye fuck and gets over her? What a self centered pile of crap. The woman he has wrecked his life for dies a second time and he just thinks "oh well I wonder if I can get that other chick with the name I couldn't even remember to come suck my cock" and we go on happily ever after.
It will take some time to determine what I think of this. It was very well writen. I just knew that she wasn't going to make it. I don't know why but I was sure. My mind couldn't get into what was happening because I was waiting for "it" to happen. Wonderfully writen, so sad, and yet still appropriate. You are a great talent to be sure.