All Comments on 'The Stalker Who Stayed Ch. 01'

Interesting and for once an honest approach to Stockholm Syndrome. I’ll admit I was curious about the story concept

I’d suggest more Tags as well as using relevant Tags. For example: putting non con and bdsm together is just an oxymoron, like military intelligence or honest lawyer.

I’d strongly recommend including: DD:LG.

It was like being dunked in ice cold water aka a firm no for me. It’s just not my thing.

Best of luck with your writing, Tess (uk)

Get vaccinated.

Please continue this!!

Thanks for your comments, chapter 2 is awaiting moderation and should be released in a few days.

Tess, thank you for your feedback. I wasn't thinking of this as a DDlg themed story but I definitely get that "Daddy" is offputting for many so I added the tag as you suggested.

Glad you picked up on the Stockholm Syndrome theme as those are the opening words of chapter 2, and I do hope to address it honestly (and no DDlg themes in chapter 2 if you want to keep reading).

Angel

Can’t wait for the next part!

God. I found this super hot, but I definitely appreciate that you've written a pov character that is just an unrepentant asshole. The anti vaxx thing isn't my cup of tea, but being charitable I suppose it sets up the kind of person who would seek to deliberately rape and abuse someone.

Wow, great start! Can’t wait to see where this goes.

It's like so many others on this site start out descent and then repeat the same fing thought a million times in a little different way.. stupid as fuck!