All Comments on 'The Stand-In'

I hate to be that person, but this is my first story on here, and I'd appreciate any feedback.

Thank you, and enjoy!

You have to tell us more about this couple. This is only the start of their journey. I really identify with the male character. I lost count of how many “good friend” girlfriends I had in school, just wish any one of them had done that to me.

Amazing! Really great writing that captures so many feelings so quickly, and maintains tension even as things escalate. HOT!!! I love the radio station setting, I’ve always gotten the worst unspoken crushes on people when we’re talking vinyl collections (and I’m young!). Please write more about this couple! You’re so talented and this is an appreciated addition to the site.