All Comments on 'The Stars Align'

Well done, I hope you continue this story.

Great story. Let's see some more.

5.

Excellent story. Great setup and scene. Good characters. Nice sexy descriptions without being too graphic. I love that we do not know her name and only her sexual desire. Would love to hear more from her. If not her, I am sure you have more to share.

Thank You!

Well written. Nice pace. Fluid description of wholly satisfying sex from a woman's perspective is most appreciated. I agree with L66 - more would be awesome.

Now that's what I call teamwork!

Thanks for the great comments. It was a bit nerve wracking uploading my first thing, so it's great to get positive responses. I have some thoughts for the next thing - maybe longer (maybe in chapters). Just need to find some time to actually work on it. I think this story took a year to get to the final form!

Fellow first time submitter here (1st story published today) and I must say I really enjoyed this. What really engaged me was how thoroughly the two men were focused on her pleasure in the climactic (pun intended) DP scene at the end. It really created a sense of intimacy, and not just sex. I am a big one for eye contact and verbal communication during sex, especially when one partner verbally encourages (or controls) the others orgasm. Well played and looking forward to more.

Well done on your first submission. It's very hot, and I shared it with my wife who's now demanding I phone a friend....