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All Comments on 'The Start of Something New'

by QuietLady1993

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Sansy1955Sansy1955about 2 years ago

I'd change the names of the guys so they aren't so similar and so it's not as confusing on who's doing what. I got a little lost reading it. But otherwise it was great!

AmavoyeurAmavoyeurabout 2 years ago

Nice writing style. very erotic. Next time I suggest you make the character's names starting with a different letter and don't shorten their names. 5 stars.

rjordanrjordanover 1 year ago

I agree with the first two. I had to give up early as I had to spend too much time figuring out who was who.

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long-time writer first-time sharer; I usually write poetry under a different pen name on a different platform but wanted to try my hand at something new