All Comments on 'The Start Pt. 03'

The story to be longer

The plot of the story is awesome. The execution is wanting. I think if you find an editor your stories could be 4 -5 stars.

Hello,

What is the difference between these postings and those of Sallysdad_uk?

I posted these stories as Sallysdad_uk but fiddled around with my profile address and got locked out consequently losing my stories.Contacted Admin and got it corrected but they left out the underscore so am reposting stories,Hope this clears up comments about this.Sallysdad

it seems the weird incest taboo is not needed; could not it be a bf gf story?