All Comments on 'The Statue of James Crowe'

Really nicely done. The action was very well done. And the idea that something mysterious was going on added to a really nice pay off at the end. You have four very interesting, pleasant characters. Nice job.

if only

you had not missed out words then maybe I would have read the whole story

Thanks litfan for the kind words. If at least one person got a kick out of it I'm happy.

And Mr. Anonymous, missing words is a bad habit of mine, but I was good with it this time. Pray tell me where I erred.

A delightful exercise in exhibition! Two sexy couples, some friendly competition and a benign kinky rich guy's gift to humanity! Another highly enjoyable entry

Thanks for reading my work again. Your comments mean alot :)