All Comments on 'The Step Sister Ch. 02'

Little ruff and short but still hot and interesting add in the dumb assed soyboy ex and we have some drama to broaden the tail. Very good and a promising fantasy. Keep going I want to know how far you can take us. Lots of possibilities. Nice story line (I like that) not just hot sex. If you want to add a little complexity consider telling us a little more about the parents. What about his mother? Seems that Matt has a sensitive nerve regarding her...humm? Details! Flesh out the back story maybe a little about Mary's dad.

Keep going let's exercise that talent a bit. You got it, give! Your fans want more!

Cheers

SAGE

love your writing but, 2 stories not finished? I can see one unfinished, and working on it but it sucks when we go to the next story and get the same thing.

Really need to finish this!!