All Comments on 'The Step Sister Ch. 03'

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oldsage_1oldsage_1over 3 years ago

Oh, you're devious! I had forgotten about the camera also! That's what hot sex will do. So what happens when Mary watches the tape and Matt and Erin's conversation? Many alternate fantasies spring to mind but I want to hear/read about yours!

5 stars

Cheers

SAGE

Hengst500Hengst500over 3 years ago

Please continue

Hengst500/Germany

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. Almost a year later part 4 would be appreciated

DAWG8265DAWG8265over 2 years ago

More, more, more please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Needs more parts, at least one more plus a prologue!

winterplayingwinterplayingover 2 years ago

Why do you/authors do this? You leave a story hanging

and then start another one without finishing a series that most definitely is a cliff hanger. I won't read any more of your stories now because I don't know if your going to finish them. And it is rude of you to do that to us readers. You want us to give you our time which we are willing to do. And hopefully we enjoy our time reading your story like you enjoy writing it. However you are being selfish and depreciative to us (your readers) by not finishing. That is not right sir.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

When does it continue?

And what happened following the visit to 'Soyboy's' father?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I need more!!! Please continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please

Finish

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Story is great... but need the finishing storylines on this please... I'm so intrigued

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So far, so good. You need to tie up the loose ends. And do it right , of course. Then this would be a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This story have the potential to be exellent ending

unclemerv77unclemerv77about 1 year ago

I want to read the 4th chapter, the first three were very good.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Would be great if you had finished the fourth chapter thanks for the story

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Ch. 4?????

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I'm just your typical body building, snowboarding, surfing, outdoors loving guy. I have been writing short stories and novels for years now and I finally decided to give my erotic short stories a place to call home. So I have been editing my stories and writing new ones in m...

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