by AnotherOldWriter
Superbly developed characters and a very well-paced erotic encounter. I hope we'll meet Carol again.
Keep writing!
Superbly developed characters and a very well-paced erotic encounter. I hope we'll meet Carol again.
Keep writing!
Cute storyline, but please proofread your story better. In the space of several sentences, you called Carol Susan, then Sharon, back to Susan and then Carol.
Excellent story, thank pharma for viagra. I'm thinking Carol will call Robert, and he will spoil her every chance he gets. She may become a trophy wife in the future, then you can write Her "loving wife" story. Just a thought. Five stars!
Extremely well-written. Good dialogue internal and external, and a long build-up to the dinner and penthouse scene. The sex scene(s) were extraordinary. His response to her was beyond the usual result and led to an ending that calls for more.
extremely; well-written
You should do another chapter with a different guy. Then maybe she and Robert meet up again.
Another fantastic story. Your descriptions of Carol's reactions and desires are spot on. I really hope you flesh both of these characters out and take them on a journey of self discovery.