All Comments on 'The Stolen Heartstone Ch. 01'

the second amazingly hot start to a new series that I’ve been lucky enough to read today.

Needless to say, this story can't continue too quickly for me.

love everything about this so far, looking forward to more!

Take this shit to mind control

Thank you for Sharing this awesome Story! (This is No shit!) I realy liked it and hope for more.

Thanks for the nice comments and encouragement. I tossed this one out as a "tester" to see if I should continue, so the positive comments/feedback have helped with that decision. Chapter 2 will be up fairly soon. I'm just doing some final edits.

To anon, regarding the category, I considered mind control, but non-consent seemed more appropriate since, although mind control plays a significant role in the story, it isn't what's forcing her to agree specifically. If others think it should be in mind control, I can adjust in the future, though, and I'll note this in the intro in future chapters.

Pure evil. But interesting premise and well-written. So, although it's not for me, I don't want you to feel you're doing a poor job.

"She wrote her name. She'd have done it either way, and it was better not to let it attune more."

Is Ellinda at this early stage of her service already under it's control ? Or is she already submissive. My evil mind loves this type of control play out.

Please don't be in a hurry to bring this to a climax. Her either.

I'm headed to your story index, to see more of your stories. You write very well, don't let us discourage you. Even now I imagine you might be writing about your own desires

@ZZChromosome

Thanks for the nice comments and encouragement, even if it's not your thing. Happy reading of stories that fit with your interests better.

@Maddit

Thanks for the reassurance. I admit it's hard to know what people are interested in, especially since this is not my normal genre. As for the story idea, it's not really my own desires. The idea came from a (only vaguely) similar dilemma that I came across in a very non erotic story I'm working on. I'd been thinking about trying my hand at erotica, and this seemed like an angle of non consent that could be interesting. So that's what I used.