All Comments on 'The Storage Room'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
HOT

Guess I've always wanted to get it on in the store room like this. You made he hot and juices flowing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
arousing

this story was well written. I am so wet! I love the descriptions of the equal desires & the kissing of the neck. The teasing was well described. would have added tounge teasing of the tits.

ithinkilikeyouithinkilikeyoualmost 11 years ago

I really liked it, but the encounter was a bit abrupt for two people happily married to other people :) Smooth out the transitions, and you'll be in good shape!

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