All Comments on 'The Store Slut'

Great stuff ignore the fucks on here and keep it coming

Keep it coming

OK, it seems to be a misogynistic fantasy story about a weird family. While the plot line may be appealing to and consistent with an erotic incest/slave fantasy it is inconsistent both in itself and with regards to the title and subtitle.

Yes, the future slave also was in a shoe shop - but before she became enslaved to her brother; not afterwards as title and subtitle suggest.

Moreover, it does not make sense to me that s h e shops for h I s new shoes when /1 he himself ruined his previous pair and /2 he needs a special fitted size.

Did I get it wrong? Will future chapters close the gaps?

Anyway, thank You for Your contribution, hope to read more, soon.

Best wishes, Simon

Yeah, this was actually really good. It was a nice change of pace from the normal stuff people read on this site. Keep it coming!

Please keep going