All Comments on 'The Storm'

Dizzying, descriptive, arousing, beautiful... please don't stop writing. Incredibly visual--I read that you are a screenwriter; that is what separates you from all the other writers here and it lends your story a stunning imagery. USE IT, use your talent--this is incredible.

Have just cum reading your story and looking at your panties stick to your shaven pussy. Great keep it up.

That was very very hot and made me cum in my pants xD. I don't normally like this type of writting where it is in the 3rd person but this is the execption. Please don't stop writting!

Great story, creamed my pants even though I was at work speaking to a dull customer on the phone while reading at the same time. Keep it up! Although being male I would love to become a lesbian myself.

I love your writing style! Well done.

I came soo hard reading that, it felt really good