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by Tom_Lym

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Fantastic. Five stars.

Amazing start. Please finish it, and make sure she ditches her crappy fiancée.

grunabonagrunabonaover 13 years ago
*****

Five stars, indeed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Whoa!

Great story, very hot and if maybe this is the wakeup call she needs to bitch slap her fiancee for desreting her when she needed him.

LunanoireLunanoireover 13 years ago
NICE Writing

Like your voice very much. This story has a wonderful rhythm to match the narrative. Interesting, believable use of language as well.

Well done you!

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