All Comments on 'The Story of Us Ch. 02'

by WillLyn

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FyrmanFyrmanabout 7 years ago
Lackland BMT

This story could have been me in the early seventies. Only her name was Kim and she was from San Antonio.

MessagesFriskedMessagesFrisked26 days ago

I'm guessing this set up was supposed to be the beginning of a multi-part saga? It's got an authentic VFW 'vibe' and flow, but stops just when the setting is established.

Maybe someone will pick it up and stay true to the G.I. narrative?

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