All Comments on 'The Stowaway'

Nice twist ending. Joy sounds hot. However, for some reason I kinda liked ol' Captain Edward too. I hope we hear more from Edward the Edible.

Whilst I think you could have played on the 'porn corn'and added perhaps a comic element commenting on how porn films use historical settings, for the novelty of the twist alone, and for some genuine sparks in your writing I'm giving this a high rating.

The whole story was undermined by the unnecicary ending.

I was looking for the Captain to get some of the lass', Ass.....

The ending ruined it for me.