All Comments on 'The Straight Girl'

by Zaftigress

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very nice!

Short and sweet

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Oh i agree. Sweet and a little too short but i liked it tremendously.

kjanekjaneover 8 years ago
Nicely done!

I love your narration--hot and sensual. What a lovely read (just wish it were longer).

TheDominantPartyTheDominantPartyover 8 years ago
Cherry Blossom

Short, sweet, georgeos, and gone too soon, like a Cherry Blossom ^^

ZaftigressZaftigressover 8 years agoAuthor
So sweet

Thank you all for your lovely kind words. I know you can't have enjoyed hearing about Anna as much as I enjoyed her, but glad you derived some pleasure anyway.

Z.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing story!

I've never commented on a story before, but you got me with "She fixed me with a saucy look." Amazing stuff.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 8 years ago

Mmm, this was good! So what happens next...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Delicious!

Believable spontaneity - partly owing to your candor about your own body image / confidence issues. Way ta be!

This one I think we'll print to read aloud at bedtime ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Only one page but that was okay because this was yum yum yummy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Is this a erotic story cuz i don't know?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Is this a erotic story or what cuz i don't know?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Is this an erotic story or what cuz i don't know?

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