All Comments on 'The Stranger at the Beach [Male POV]'

This is an excellent romance story- as far as it goes. Unfortunately, it is too short in all aspects. The introduction both to the situation and the characters is very brief, and the ending is too abrupt. The love scene is well written, but it too should have been longer, especially given the quality of the writing. A sequel is certainly warranted.

Great short story, leaving a little to the imagination, but complete as it stands. A few errors which broke the fast flow; sentences without verbs for example.