All Comments on 'The Stranger on the Cruise'

If you are going to write a story based onboard a Cruise ship, at least find out how expenses are charged. You use a pass card system and any expenses get charged to your cabin. Wallets are not required.

Re the story... the less said, the better. But why would his slut wife have been in the Toilets for at least 30 minutes? Before cuck boy enters.

Wife sharing fun is OK if both parties agree but you wrote this in as rape and not some fantasy or role play. If you did... I missed it.

Not only is the writing awkward, but the situation is unrealistic in every conceivable way. Science fiction is more plausible than this story. Since there are no negative stars available, I am forced to 'award' this story at least one star.

How the hell did they last "just over a year" without him having a clue. I think that if I were writing this story, it would have been way more believable that they were on their honeymoon cruise.

Are you twelve? The writing is terrible, it's immature and devoid of any quality or detail to grab and hold the readers attention. It reads like the ego stroke story a teenage boy who has never had sex writes in his diary to think about while stroking his underwhelming package. You should have left it there, where nobody could see it.

This is so bad I'm embarrassed FOR you.

She needs the stranger's baby bump to show after returning home.

WTF??? A guy rapes his wife and this asshole just stands there watching and rubs his own dick? Jesus, at least make some small effort to write something semi-realistic. This is just too stupid,

Not only was this unenjoyable, but I think it may risk causing brain damage in the readers as they try to figure out what the fuck they just read. 1*

Pitiful load of fucking bollocks

Yuck

Mysle ze autor nie jest starszy niz 20 lat. W tym wieku ma się dziwne fantazje.