All Comments on 'The Stranger on the Train'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Wish it was longer.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 5 years ago
Wonderful

Short, sweet, anonymous, and totally erotic. Five stars. -- JB

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Incredible story. Wish it was longer but it was very enjoyable to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Delicious!

Wow .. something similar happened to me on a but, but it go that far. Delicious memories.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 5 years ago
for

some reason I have always liked Non-consent stories on trains and subways, yours was good but way too short, write another make it longer and with people watching and clothes removed, a naked woman stripped on a train felt up by strangers and fucked to orgasm

BC100000BC100000over 5 years ago
Very arousing!

Thanks for posting this. Please write and post more!

adgeonadgeonover 5 years ago
I liked it

Needs more tension though, as others suggest.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 5 years ago
Nice!

Fast, hot, and enjoyable, just like the clandestine fuck on the commute home!

curiouscarolecuriouscaroleover 5 years ago
Take your time!

Lovely subject but in the words of the song “ slow down, you move too fast”.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Could have been better

It didn't really seem like a nonconsent/reluctance

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