All Comments on 'The Strawberry'

Well written, very sexy and very believable. This is either a true experience or you have an excellent erotic imagination.

I will look forward to future submissions from you.

a sweet stylish sexy story

and verrrrry arousing

Jo

The story drew me in . . . seduced me . . . just as the character in the story was slowly seduced. And I'm pretty sure I enjoyed the seduction as much as she did!

This is the sort of story that has me thinking of sinking into a hot shower as I replay all the images in my mind....

excellent build-up! loved it!