All Comments on 'The Stronger Girl 07'

Best yet!

Wonderful writing! I hope you will continue there story off these 3 characters. So much love and so much tension. Thanks for the opera!

Omg I love it! Definitely worth the wait! I love Annie being the submissive and just wanting to please! I also love how you kept mentioning eye contact that detail made it so much more sexy

So glad to see you’re still following along with these stories and enjoying them Ashleyy - I really like the image of Nancy and Annie looking to one another, happy to know that translates.

The intensity of writing in this series has matched or exceeded that of the erotic energy that it captures. Perhaps one aids and abets the other. Well crafted writing that's more than a pleasurable read.

I am still very much enjoying these characters, and so glad to know it comes through. Thanks so much, DulcisFontis (& anons).

Intelligent, subtle, fascinating, the whole series is ridiculously brilliant. Its psychological depth equals its dark powerful eroticism. Deserves to be published as a novel. Thank you so much for a moment of pure pleasure.

Thanks so much sweetelisa, it’s always a treat to hear from another writer, and I especially enjoyed your story - beautifully constructed and written. I hope you’ll post more.

Reading this story was like drifting into a dream world. Great job

That’s a lovely description Cupertino. I’m so happy to hear you enjoyed it.

Beautiful, simply beautiful! You are a wonderful writer!

Thank you, CeeCee, I'm so happy you're enjoying the stories.

I have read alot of erotica on this site, but you are heads and tails the best storyteller. Wonderful storyline, great character development

and a great continuation and ending. Just love your writing style. Your use of language with such precision and detail is so well done. I must check out all of your work!

So glad you enjoyed the story SF1, and especially that the use of language stands out. I take a great deal of pleasure crafting these stories. I’ve taken a break from Annie and Michele, but I still think about them a great deal and wonder where they’re headed. It’s a wonderful feeling not to know.

Fabulous story. Erotic, sensuous and just a little bit dirty! Loved the way the non linear timeline gave glimpses into events and then later we learned more.

Great writing…thank you

Just a little dirty?!?! JulesBabe how much dirtier can the girls get? So glad you like the writing style, I really enjoyed crafting these stories.

Just the most wonderful series. Yes there is d\s not really my thing but then the emotion comes through so my fears of coercion dispel. The sex scenes are so intense and original and the characters come to life so well surely this at least among the best on the site. Thanks for a most enjoyable read

Thanks for the wonderful feedback Anon, we all have our turn ins and turn offs, nice to know the story was compelling enough to pull you out of your comfort zone.

Had to come back to my favorite chapter!! My my my always gets the job done *wink wink * Michele's one lucky girl lol

Fantastic work. I hate to admit it but with many of the authors of lesbian romance I follow I often start skimming the sex scenes as they often seem inessential to the story and inner life of the characters. You, on the other hand, manage to seamlessly combine plot and character into the erotic elements in a way that creates an entire fabric.

In addition your ability to jump forward and backwards in time without jarring or confusing the reader is to be admired. Not many can achieve what you have achieved here. Bravo!

An absolutely superb series and one that I have thoroughly enjoyed from the very beginning. I found Annie to be a very sympathetic character and one I totally engaged with though Michele was a lot more complex and I do hope this is not the last we hear of her. As one who has never prescribed to purely hygenic sex I found the anal-centric content to be very acceptable though I could have done without the gay sex. But that's just me. So well done and I hope to read more of your work in the future.

Thank you for reading AliceGee, I’m so glad you enjoyed the stories and sympathize with Annie - I really like her, which I know is like laughing at my own joke, but I felt like I watched her emerge rather than “made” her. I found some of the choices she made and situations she found herself in surprising (I am not at all turned on by the same things as Annie). I’ve never watched make gay sex, I’m not against it, it’s just not my thing, but I like that it’s Michele’s thing, and that Annie enjoyed it. That’s an interesting (and surprising) part of their story for me.

I just binge read the seven chapters, so far, of this beautifully written series. You remind me of Anis Nin's writing; it's as lyrical and intense. It is wonderfully original writing in descriptions of feelings, passion, and their intense physicality of love making/sex. I love the psychology of the three "beautiful, good girls." Thank you for writing this. I will read all your stories. Wow.

To be compared to Nin is the highest imaginable praise, thanks so much Leaping_Hind. I very much enjoyed writing these stories, and am so happy to know they are bringing others pleasure - especially more serious readers. It’s my hope that the stories can stand up to repeated and deep reading. (To dream is free.)

Good story, l loved the lingerie saleswoman part and would hope that could be developed into a separate series of adventures now that the spark of lesbian seduction has been well and truly lit .

Thank you

Wow got to the end and was like no, this can't be the end. Loved how you intertwined the past and present.

More Annie and Michele please

A very intense and erotic journey to ... where exactly?

There is no good resolution for these three girls. Too many broken personalities that you've done nothing but point out problems. You've given us NO hint of how they might be able to survive, not just as a trio, but as individuals. They're all hopelessly broken. And disappointingly sad.

Prove me wrong... I dare you...

A few more words, after thinking a while.

This series isn't a story. It's maybe a great introduction to a story, but it's timeline is less than a month. Stories have beginnings, middles, and endings. This one barely has a beginning. You've barely introduced the characters and, story-wise, nothing of interest has even happened so far.

Prove to us you are a writer. Give us the middle and the ending.

How can you invest that much effort ... and then just stop? Have you got that much time on your hands to just discard all that work? If you're not going to finish it, do everyone a favor and just withdraw it.

Until then, I'll be skipping to another writer who can write stories, and there are plenty of them here.

And I'll be ignoring the rest of your submissions as well. Not interested in invest my time in another non-story.

You don’t have to have a point to have a point okami.

Am a lesbian. Your wrting is better than having sex. Keep up the lust

I personally have enjoyed this series so far and I think the timeframe and flow is fine...as long as it continues. With each chapter we learn a little bit more about the characters as we watch the relationships progress. If it ends here though, then yes, I will have felt like I've been left hanging with no real conclusion.

My only real complaint is the jumping back and forth between the past and present with the scenes. It got especially confusing when you read all the chapters straight through. A minor thing...

Other than that, this is a fine example of sensual lesdom erotica. No need for the extreme pain, degradation and humiliation to portray the relationship dynamics. All the scenes were very hot and I hope the author continues providing more delicious chapters.

Thank you so much charlene2811, I’m very happy to hear you are getting off on these stories, I sometimes think writing is better than sex.

I’m glad to know the back and forth in time wasn’t too distracting AsLongAsItContinuesAnon - I understand how it can make for confusion, and have done my best to keep the present and the past as clear as possible in all my stories, but I get that I am asking a lot of my readers. (It’s very interesting to hear that it is MORE dislocating, not less, for someone reading straight through not at all what I’d have expected.) I’m grateful that you stuck with me.

I get that you and others (looking at you okami1061, but you too 2xsafreak ) want this series to continue, I do too. I’ve taken a few swings at a chapter eight over the last year or so. You will be happy to know I’ve even written some, including a couple really wonderful sex scenes, but unfortunately nothing that engaged my imagination in meaningful directions. I think TSG is going to be a longer term project - no idea how long term, sorry. In the meantime my imagination is deeply engaged with chipping away at writing a satisfying ending to the Impact stories. It’s a very different dynamic, but I hope you will give them a try.

I do hope your return to this series. Wishing you much imaginative energy for 2023.

I really liked this story. Your writing is awesome and the dialog is very well done something that is often lacking in other stories I've read on here. Loved the way you maneuvered past and present through Annie's thoughts. I can see this turning into a very long project for you. Annie may think of Michele as the stonger girl but it is Annie that this little world seems to revolve around and if it were to come down to a dedicated couple I can only see that happening and would love to see that happen between Annie and Nancy because they just seem to have a natural flow between them. I can understand why you're so dedicated to "Impact" as it deserves that perfect ending and I'm also looking forward to seeing where you take these girls or where they take you. Thanks for another great read.

I think about Annie regularly, and Nancy, and Michele, but mostly just to wonder how they might be doing - no real image of what’s next. Perhaps when I’ve wrapped Impact, I hope so. Thank you Wilding, and StrongerAnon. I think you are exactly right about Annie, but I’m not sure what it would take for her to realize that.

PHYS 200 textbook! A curricular hint!

I think Little One was dozing while the train passed through my Spuyten Duyvil?

Sweet that Nancy was so excited to see them back!

Outstanding. I strongly endorse continuing this great series.

I thoroughly enjoyed this series. Excellently layered and highly focused. I think the dorm room setting combined with the expertly crafted d/s dynamic accentuates the sex (which are easily the best written scenes of this nature that I've come across in this genre). I've read all your other series and rate them all highly. However, I do come back to this series the most often, I think because of the simplicity and the almost singular focus on Michelle's desires (her strictness w/ Annie and Nancy) and her air of command. I would love to see the series continue.

Thank you ComeBackOftenAnon, I find the force of Michele’s desires magnetic as well. Because this series refuses the conventions of a D/s story, I’m glad to know it’s appreciated on those terms. I would love the series to continue as well, but for whatever reason don’t feel compelled to do so… perhaps when I finish Impact I’ll come back to TSG.

I find your stories so immersive it is very disappointing when they finish. Keep writing please. There are lots of stories in this genre but few of this quality and inclusiveness.

keep going.

Just beautiful. The writing, the characters, the visionary refs to the three bodies problem I’m a very old, published author so I recognise good writing when I stumble across it. It’s been a joy.

Thank you VeryOldAnon, it’s always a special treat to hear from other authors. The writing has been a wonderful discovery for me. I’m pleased to know the three body reference struck a cord with you. You too S9808, so glad to see you’re enjoying all the stories.

I refuse to believe that this story is finished. :) It's too good.

It's quite a remarkable piece of writing. I find it's often challenging in erotic stories to incorporate narrative about the participants with the juicy erotic bits. One part always seems to suffer. Here, it feels like either piece could stand nicely on its own, and the parts are woven beautifully together, and complement each other nicely. The story pulls you in, and refuses to let go.

I sometimes found myself lagging a bit at some of the shifts back and forth between flashbacks/scenes. The scene would change, and I had to play a little catch up. Still, I thought of some of those 'fast dissolves" like a segue in a jazz piece from a sax solo back to the chorus...the listener just needs to follow the improv.

Great work.

You’ve been here a looooong time mikecable (2004!) so I very much appreciate the praise coming from you, and enjoy the jazz analogy. I’m very glad the narrative about the relationship feels equal to the sex - I enjoy writing both parts, but not always at the same time, so I struggle to keep them balanced.

I hope that if you keep reading, that you will keep commenting. I’m curious if the intercutting and flashbacks improve for you as I go along (while I like to reference highbrow art, I really don’t have literary pretensions, it just seems to be the way I think. I have worked hard to make the leaps more legible for readers.) Thanks so much for reading and for letting me know what you like. XOSNS

I've reread this story the most often of the three and the most recent comment triggered something in why that may be. The cloistered setting of the dorm room/university really adds to the intensity (almost repressive) and the narrative decisions (this series is probably the most minimalist of the three in terms of other events and the suspension of time) and I think it really works in combination with the d/s theme. It combines beautifully with the psychology of Annie being preoccupied with the pre-eminence of Michelle. We don't need Annie at class or more of her daily routine (IMO) for the way this story has been told. There are some school interludes but the pacing is perfectly matched with rhythm of the characters. I'll use that Jazz reference in another way...the beat matches the storytelling and the d/s dynamic. Other stories may be more reggae or what have you. One could almost say, that it's been perfectly edited. (even if it wasn't cut down, the end product is so streamlined)

This is just my perspective obviously. I rate all the series but for these reasons and others, I find myself rereading this series the most. Great work. I hope there's a little more. :)

Thank you for the kind words RereadingAnon. I enjoy the claustrophobia of the dorm room fantasy as well - a hidden world, behind a veil. I’m glad to know the rhythm matches the storytelling, and deeply glad it’s not reggae (although the ska driven house party in the Lovers Rock episode of Steve McQueen’s Small Ax is one of the sexiest things I’ve ever watched).

It really does give me great pleasure to know these stories are being reread. I am a rereader and like the idea that I’ve made something worthy of being reread.

Indeed. All those films in the Small Axe anthology were great. Great taste. And great filmmaker.