by unclewacked
Great story but definitely needs to be continued to a more natural ending.
hot story. Secret desires, clandestine liaisons, careless voyeurism, mild domination and some very good writing made this one of the better short stories.
Loved the premise of this story. Noisy sex in the quietest place on campus with a slut and a pain slut. Nice build up to Marsha's involvement, especially the slapstick image of Marsha with her sopping wet knickers round her ankles. Wonderfully erotic and not drawn out too far.