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by Tawjg423319

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Volunteer_Volunteer_29 days ago

Damn, how I loved this story. I connected with it so well. I hope there will be a part 2. If you need an editor, do reach out.

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AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

Well, this was quite an unusual writing style. The end of their first evening together and their subsequent texts I found disappointing, I was expecting and hoping for more. I would love their friendship to blossom in Newcastle.

The spelling slipups reminded me a bit of Dutch language. But even so, keep the story going.

NickUK_m37NickUK_m3729 days ago

Great start to a story, is this just part one?

DINGDONG33DINGDONG3329 days ago

Good story I like how you told it hope you continue the story love to see how they end up

SilverFoxMulletSilverFoxMullet20 days ago

I enjoyed this one. Thanks!

Bov4usmithBov4usmith20 days ago

I can't wait for the next chapter.

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Hey all. I know I’ve been very quiet for a while. My work is rather hectic so I go through long stretches unable to write. I caught the bug again and am working on multiple projects. I want to finish Saving Justina. That will be a 9-10 chapter series. I will do a chapter...