All Comments on 'The Submissive Babysitter Pt. 04'

Very erotic. But turning the husband into a cuck makes the story lose its appeal. Perhaps if the submissive babysitter were to concentrate on the wife and her desires, along with that of her husband, the storyline would be stronger. With the husband being turned into a niave cuck, the story is more about the adventures of the cheating wife than the submissive babysitter. FYI. But thanks for the story. Cheers.

This is a great story line!! It never fails to amaze me how so many commenters tell the writer how to change their story to make it better... BETTER FOR WHO??? You have a great formula with this one!!! Please keep this story alive, as it is working perfect just as it is!!! Thanks!!

Agree with Strappy. Great writing, looking forward to more.

Cindy’s Adventures is still however one of the hottest stories I have read on literotica tho 😃

Like Strappy said, great story!

Speechless. You have done it again. Even better than the last three. How you catch the nuances of submission and baring one’s self. 10 stars