All Comments on 'The Substitute Housewife'

Oh my, I am loving this so far. I really hope this keeps going

Love this !

Lovely start. Please do continue.

Interesting start to a good story. Looking forward to more.

A good start. I'm looking forward to reading further parts.

More of that would be nice 🙂

Another great story from Leeanna. Whenever I see a new post from her it brings a smile to may face.

Great start to the story, looking forward to part 2

I always look forward to your stories, I'd love to hear more of this one!

Loved it a lot more please

Thanks. It was a long setup for me. I didn't want a "forced" story as we all know they are nearly impossible in real life.

Peter has a dream, and he cares about people. In real life, these things are used against you.

Love this story line, and here's hoping, there are a lot more chapters, to come...There are so

many possibilities, for you to explore, and I'm sure you will...

Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo

This story has promise. I like the premise of it and the plot can go many ways depending on Leeanna's deviousness writing. Leeanna has used the tag "tricked" which hasn't yet happened but I'm sure is about to. I suspect that Mr Yasimo is going to be tricked for sure when Peter presents as Ken's wife Susan. I hope Mr Yasimo makes a pass at her and is pleasantly surprised at what he finds in her knickers. And surely Ken is going to want his new wife to consummate their marriage. Let's hope the 'real'' Susan gets her comeuppance. Plenty of potential here Leeanna xxx Michele

Lots of fun so far

I only gave it four stars because there s really no sex but, I do think it’s a promising start and I look forward to the next chaoter.💕