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AnonymousAnonymous3 days ago

Cant't wait

deedolitodeedolito8 days ago

Yeeeessss. More is coming. Thx very much @vegitto306 . By th way, I agree with anonymous : very high heels, collar, cuffs, mini dress, stockings, plug, vibrator are obviously welcome ;-)

AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

we need more (and hopefully a little bit more of heels, stockings, plug, vibrator...)

vegitto306vegitto30628 days agoAuthor

Chapter 2 will probably be a month. It's mostly done except for the ending portions.

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

Can you tell us when do you plan release of 2nd chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great storyline. Well written. How about at State the daughter joins the group?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Well written story. One of the best I've read.

This story describes in detail how a good housewife and mother is seduced into a BBC slut by her students.

I hope that you continue this story with a few more chapters and don't make us wait so long for the next sequel.

Maybe you can tell us when the next sequel will be released.

Dana2020Dana2020about 2 months ago

Her slow decline is perfect!!! Very well done.

Tica21Tica212 months ago

Best freaking story I've read in a long time. Author goes to top of my list.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

All your stories are fabulous. The India based stories are equally awesome. Unless you are an Indian I don't know how you have managed to get the nuances there right?

hof_yamhof_yam2 months ago

great continue writing with alot of intimate description

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Maybe next story the team could blackmail avy to do it again but with more guys and maybe Isis

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

it would make a great x-rated movie

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Easily a five star. Very interesting. Great writing here.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

brought back memories of one of my favourite reads: Miss Sarah Stevens and her friends of Westville High sluts written by Zaxxon and other authors. So hot.

vegitto306vegitto3062 months agoAuthor

@anon - Ada’s story is in the works. Have got an idea on how to work it out but will try to get to it soon

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

that was a hot story. loved how Avy seemed so innocent and naive and the boys managed to turn her out. Hope they have more in store for her at the final game. Also loved how they talked dirty about her during sex and how she was initially offended but later accepted it.

Still waiting the read about Asa (Tamika's mom), isn't she also a teacher there?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Grt story

2nd part

vegitto306vegitto3063 months agoAuthor

Hi,

Yes. The description is based on Avy Scott. I'm a big fan of her.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Is this character an homage to the adult actress avy Scott? Because I love her so much. Great story hope chapter two involves her daughter too.

spgmarinespgmarine3 months ago

More and maybe add the daughter and husband too.

Brake down the chapters

dirtysondirtyson3 months ago

The next season she will be having a big belly and milk tanks for the training sessions , i wonder how she is going to explain that to her husband...

vegitto306vegitto3063 months agoAuthor

Hi folks,

This will be incest in the coming chapters. I now realize that I might have put this chapter in interracial and the later ones in incest. Apologies for that

deedolitodeedolito3 months ago

best story ever. Write another chapter, please.

YanoSamaYanoSama3 months ago

Good story, just wondering why was it on the Incest category. I kept waiting for her daughter to join in or something like that.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great story, but how does this fit under the Incest category?

bluecatz123bluecatz1233 months ago

That was fantastic. Could you incorporate some anal in your stories? In a lot of these group situations I think it would work real well.

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