All Comments on 'The Suburban Mom Pt. 02'

Beautiful story. Beautifully written.

Superb storytelling, with all the hallmarks of a woman's perspective. 5 stars, rounded down.

Very sensual, very absorbing.

I like the blend of steamy sex and philosophical reflection. You also write with wit. I look forward to further instalments.

Please... tell me there's more !

Nicely done.

I expected heterosexual relations.

Excellent!!! I've read both stories, giving each of them 5 stars, and find them quite erotic and arousing! I simply cannot wait for part 3. For a straight girl, you write as being very experienced making love to women. Keep up the good work sweetie!!

Thank you, everyone! Yes, there's more. I'm not sure how much yet. We'll see how it develops.

And, FarmerRon1955, all you need is a lot of curiosity and a little imagination...

Love it! 5stars. Attention Attention Marcia has now cross the line, where does it all go from here is this a one time deal with Alyssa? or does she become her main squeeze as she taste several others? chapter 3 please.

Wow, were classy,, building and erotic. Would like to have seen a little more at the end, like Marcia pleasing Alyssa...

Love it. I did think, however, that Marcia seemed to get into the sex with Alyssa too fast and seemed too knowledgeable for someone who had never been with another woman.

it was a wonderful second chapter, even when the story changed from the erotic to hypothetical. not my thing, when it changes, so only 4 stars

Wonder what Marcia's bitch bud Mrs Peterson would think with her friend bun's open kneeling with an eager co-ed dyke behind her devouring her doubtless musky pucker...

...was supposed to be '..buns-up kneeling...'-frigging spell-check

Alyssa really a gold-star...''...thought of penis revolted her...'-funny

...and her gaydar spot-on...horny milf/lesbian virgin ready to see how things really are on the other team

...will be curious to see what other things Alyssa tries with her-perhaps a strap-on not inevitable given Alyssa's thoughts about penis

Wow! Great erotica!! Can’t wait to keep going. I was so hard during this! Great writing!