All Comments on 'The Suburban Mom Pt. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Series started off okay and got better but lately I have been disappointed in the characters' development not only as sex partners but also as individuals. Stories are not as lively, as descriptive or maybe I just expect too much. Good luck with your future writings.

conistonoldman23conistonoldman239 months ago

Wey hey! Gay sex! Nicely done too

Polperro59Polperro599 months ago

Unexpected twist. Strangely hot

PappasleazePappasleaze9 months ago

not sure about this chapter, I needed more more of what i don't know. I do think that I need to get a score card to keep up with who is who and did what to whom, who is the dominate ones and who are the submissive ones. this what 10 or 12 characters now? maybe we will see Dean get a butt full of Daryl in the next chapter. I also hope Dean never gets Alicia.

LucienleuwenLucienleuwen9 months ago

A most entertaining read. Thank you.

kekyrakekyra9 months ago

This is very innovative indeed. More please!

Rainyday493Rainyday4939 months ago

Very compelling, nice move turning Dean on with a blowjob from Daryl. Keep it cumming.

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I am in my mid/late twenties and love painting and handcrafting. I have recently started writing again, encouraged by the success of a short story in an online competition. I took a creative writing minor at college. I am straight but bicurious.

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