All Comments on 'The Subway Succubus'

A well crafted and excellently paced story that's both erotic and terrifying. As expected from Lit's succubus specialist. Top marks.

Huh, well there are worse ways to go! Nice horror story!

"[..] his eyes still open and blinking, like mud thrown at a wall. He let out a final blissful sigh and his eyes closed"

Ooh! Delightfully chilling imagery. In a handful of words you really captured a feeling. Great job!

Another great read from the master of Succubi Horror. Glad to see you're still writing, Hydra!

Great story. Glad to see a new story from you.

Nicely chilling! And very descriptive. I felt like I was right there, watching it all.

I always love reading your stories hope it will be more in the future

This story is very good, I hope you win & keep up the good work.

Glad to see you still writing. Great story even if Lit’s mods can’t stay consistent with allowing snuff or not.

You’ve only gone and done it again. Excellent work. I hope you win the competition.

Great story. I liked the interplay between the characters and the twist at the end. The succubus was very well realized and the setting suitably atmospheric. 5 stars.

5* and more if I could give it.

Horrific!!! Makes one wary of ever going on a late night subway train.

That was an amazing ride.

I "almost" want to find that train.

Wow.

Loved the way you described the distinctly different experiences of the intellectual realization of calamity and the overpowering pull of ecstasy - they seem mutually exclusive, and yet.

Awesome story!!

I swear you write the best succubus-snuff stories. No one can come close

I miss your great succubus stories, especially the snuff ones.