All Comments on 'The Succubae Seduction Ch. 30'

the way I hoped you will bring back Lisa...

lisas back teeheehee well kinda 3;) and onidine grrr and allora hmmmmm just keeps getting better you guys rock

well you wanted comments here it is was one of the best stories iv,e read.I found myself fast forwarding through a lot of the sex just to get to the story I hope there is more in the future. good job

You started meh, and you've been growing steadily.

I see your writing style hammering out and the flagging in it has gotten less.

I appreciate how you're endeavouring to keep a sense of humanity and weakness to the hero, trying to prevent him from being a mary sue.

Good job thus far.

Awesome story so far, cant wait for the next chapters, and the sequel. Yes that's right people a sequel, WOHOO!

JC

Probably 3rd or 4th read of whole story-Great! Will keep checking for more.

Just going to leave a comment here to let you know how much your work is apreciated. Thanks bro!

Luscious and captivating! Thank you for your fine series!

Well DB I think you and Garbonzo are doing fantastic . As a fan I'm qualified to make that statement . A GR8 editor is invaluable . But these are your works , creations , worlds , characters . The brains and teller of the tale . One very awesome tale for sure . So thank you .

I do have to wonder a little . Every so often there is a small mention of of a bit of jealousy from Lyden when another man looks adoringly at one of the girls . That just seems so out of place to me . The same as when you mention one of the girls with slight jealousy of one of the girls . I feel like this group is above that . Not necessary . Even though it has been minimal and unfounded . And I know that is a very real emotion . And appropriate in some stories . It is your story though . It just feels off in this one .

I am thoroughly enjoying every minute of this tale . So Kudo's my man .