All Comments on 'The Succubus Experiment Ch. 02'

Your latest story is your best yet. I had not cared for teenage succubus( no accounting for taste,right). But this one is great. Action, characters, emotions, explosions, sex! Even explosive sex! I can't wait for more

good story. Love the twist at the end. More please.

I mainly read literotica for the sex, but your stories go beyond it. This series is incredible. The characters, plot, and twists have me enthralled. Please keep writing. Not only for the amazing sex scenes, but to do justice and lend a conclusion to such an incredible story.

Really enjoying this series. I like how all the stories stand on their own but link together so interestingly. Please keep up the excellent work!

really good story, with a really good twist at the end of this chapter! looking forward to the rest of the story.

Two parts in both of these are not enough you need to finish more like 8 months ago... you can't leave it hanging like that

From 1 year and 4 months ago!?? Is it over?

I have thoroughly enjoyed the story so far; however, I am disappointed that it has been two years since it was posted and we are left hanging. I hope you will give your readers another chapter or two. Would like to see the ongoing development of the characters and how the various parts of the storyline will come together.

You had Marks declare himself a succubi, which is wrong for two reasons. First, succubi is plural, the singular is succubus. Second, unless he had a spontaneous sex change while we the readers weren’t looking, he’d be an incubus not a succubus. Incubus and succubus are gender-specific terms, just like man and woman are.