All Comments on 'The Summer of 2004 Ch. 01'

i can't believe no one's commented on this yet! good job, well written and hot. you threw me off a little bit with Robert's expression of disgust at one point in the story, though. i hope that's cleared up in the succeeding parts. but over all, very good story. can't wait til they fuck.

Awesome first chapter. The dream sequence was fucking hysterical!

("What an asshole I am," I said out loud. I didn't care if the lake air carried it to Robert's ears. I felt like such an idiot.)

--it's too bad he didn't keep this close call to a possible beat-down and humiliation and firing incident in mind and learn from it_ cause by not being a cautious, normal, respectful, decent human being- he becomes a slut who lick/sucks/fucks/ his friends, the marine and his father. cheating on the man he claims to love (the marine). trying to seduce his father to have sex with him and be unfaithful to his mother. telling his father he's 'in love' with him and offering himself up to his father- while his mom is upstairs in bed. i'm kinda surprised you didn't have him sexing up his friends' fathers as well. when you mentioned all his brothers- i was sure you were going to have him doing his brothers as well- or offering himself up for his brothers to use/do him.. i've only read this chapter and the last couple of chaps- so maybe he does do that stuff?

regardless of the absence of human decency and restraint in mike_ the story is certainly entertaining- well written too. the dialogs are good. your characters/personalities are good_ you write hot sex scenes. you're very descriptive. well done

GOOD STORY .............DINKYBOOTS

Just started this after reading some of your other stories. Really looking forward to the rest of the story.

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